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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The given line chart presents how many
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 were borrowed from four libraries over a four months period, and the pie chart depicts the percentage of
books
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 borrowed in terms of genre. It is clear to see that the borrowing patterns between each village’s library were quite different and that fiction was by far the most popular type of book. The borrowing trend of
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 in Sutton wood and Rye slip started very high, at 250 and 300 per month in June respectively.
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books
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 borrowed from rye slip fell steadily to around 175
at the end
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 of the period, Sutton wood followed a fluctuation in their numbers. It sank to 100 in August, before climbing to 300 in September, which represents the highest level of borrowing of the four.
On the other hand
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, West Eaton and Church Mount followed a very similar pattern, with both starting at 50 per month, but
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 gradually rising to finish at 150. Looking at the pie chart, we can see that fiction has the highest demand, at 43%. The next most popular genre
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 biographies, accounting for around a fifth of the total. The borrowing of science and history were identical (14%), leaving self-help as the least popular at 10%.

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