Some people get into debt by buying things they dont need and cant afford. what are the reasons for this behaviour? what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem.
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this
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people
are Use synonyms
attracting
to various things that are unnecessary for them and pushing them into the world of debt. Wrong verb form
attracted
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issue becoming a headache for not only Linking Words
to
individuals but Change preposition
for
also
nations' economies. The consequences of Linking Words
this
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are seem
very severe Change the verb form
seem
such
as ending Linking Words
life
to killing Add an article
a life
other
to get rid of the debt. The following paragraphs will discuss Correct pronoun usage
others
causes
of Correct article usage
the causes
this
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as well as
what steps should be taken to avoid Linking Words
people
from getting into these problems.
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first
question,Add an article
the first
peoples'
desire for buying expensive things is Change noun form
people's
on
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at
the
peak in Change the word
its
compare
to Replace the word
comparison
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last
four decades. Correct article usage
the last
However
, the income of Linking Words
crowd
has been in Correct article usage
the crowd
a
steady growth. Remove the article
apply
Therefore
, Linking Words
buying
items which are not necessary Change the verb form
to buy
people
are taking Use synonyms
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loan
from Add an article
a loan
the
companies at higher rate Correct article usage
apply
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of
intrest
, and Correct your spelling
interest
simliar
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similar
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this
many of Change preposition
to this
it
are Correct pronoun usage
them
also
finding a credit card an option to Linking Words
fullfill
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fulfil
there
need. Correct your spelling
their
For instance
, the growth of purchasing cars not only in cities but Linking Words
also
in Linking Words
rural
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a rural
the rural
area
has Fix the agreement mistake
areas
increase
tremendously, ignoring the fact that, public transport is cheaper and safer way to travel. Change the verb form
increased
Secondly
, inadequate knowledge about personal finances has Linking Words
also
become Linking Words
major
issue in recent years, where everyone is focusing on Add an article
a major
show
off Change the form of the verb
showing
themselve
and being careless about Correct your spelling
themselves
financial
position.
Add an article
the financial
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many Linking Words
expert
in Change to a plural noun
experts
this
field,suggesting that if it Linking Words
not
controlled soon Add a missing verb
is not
people
will struggle in their life and to avoid Use synonyms
these
, governments from Correct pronoun usage
this
the
different countries should put some strict laws on Correct article usage
apply
thhe
Correct your spelling
the
people
Use synonyms
while
applying for Linking Words
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Add an article
a loan
the loan
loan
, Fix the agreement mistake
loans
also
banks should Linking Words
invistigate
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investigate
applicants
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applicants'
applicant's
background
before sanctioning any Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
loan
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
government
should teach Add an article
the government
children's
about finance Change noun form
children
in
Change preposition
at
the
early age to prevent them from making any bad Correct article usage
an
desicion
in future. Adults should make Correct your spelling
decision
decisions
themselevs
aware Correct your spelling
themselves
about
how to handle money from Change preposition
of
todays
technology.
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today's
To sum up
, managing money is a serious problem in the recent world and ease with Linking Words
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Add an article
the loan
a loan
loan
and the desire to show off is Fix the agreement mistake
loans
major
cause for it. Add an article
a major
the major
By introducing
new hard laws for loans and educating Change preposition
Introducing
people
at Use synonyms
the
early age can be Correct article usage
an
Add an article
the solution
a solution
solution
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
for
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to
this
situation.Linking Words
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