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Some people The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparson

Some people The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparson
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The given tabular graphs represent the proportion of British
students
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 who can speak other languages apart from English, at one university in England, in the years 2000 and 2010.
This
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 passage will highlight on main features. In
this
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 ,graph
students
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 are divided into 6 different types,
Such
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students
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 who speak only one
language
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that is
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 French, Spanish or German and
Students
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 who can speak another,
two
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 other or even no other
language
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. In the year 2000, Student who
speak
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speaks
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 only the German
language
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 and student who speak
two
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 other languages are given the same 10%,
whereas
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students
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 who can speak only French and
students
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 who can speak another
language
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 is given to be 15%. The remaining
two
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 are
students
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 who speak no other
language
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 which is about 20% and the
language
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that is
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 spoken mostly by
students
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 is Spanish which is about 30%. In comparison to 2000, the percentage given for each type has changed a lot. As we see
this
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 year, a student who speaks No other
language
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 and French has shrunk to 10% each from 20% and 15%. The German
language
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 is spoken equally by 10% of
students
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.
Whereas
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,
students
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 who speak
two
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 other languages, Another
language
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 and Spanish
language
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 have increased from 10%, 15% and 30% to 15%, 20% and 35% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language, two with synonyms.
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