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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The six pie charts show how much
water
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 was used for various aims among six areas of the world namely North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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. In detail, the highest volume of
water
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 used for agriculture in Central
Asia
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, accounting for 88 per
cent
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, followed by
Africa
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 and South East
Asia
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 at around 84 and 81 per
cent
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, respectively. Meanwhile, industrial
usage
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 of
water
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 was at the bottom among these areas except South East
Asia
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, which accounted for 5 per
cent
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 (Central
Asia
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) and 7 per
cent
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 (
Africa
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). Domestic using of
water
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 was the same at about seven-tenth of all
water
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usage
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 in Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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,
whereas
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 it was just under one-tenth in
Africa
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. Moving to the other countries,
water
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 consumption for industrial purposes was the most popular in North
America
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 and
Europe
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, accounting for somewhere in the vicinity of 50 per
cent
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,
while
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 it was 5 times lower in South
Africa
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. Consuming
water
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 for the domestic aim was second most popular in South
America
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, making up moderately 19 per
cent
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,
whereas
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 it was less than one-fifth in
Europe
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 and North
America
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.
Moreover
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, agricultural
usage
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 of
water
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 was twice larger in South
America
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 in comparison to
Europe
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 and North
America
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, accounting for roughly 71 per
cent
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Overall
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, it is evident that the paramount amount of
water
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 was used for agriculture,
while
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 domestic
usage
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 of
water
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 was the lowest in all places except South
America
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, africa, asia, cent, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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