There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention that I have been facing several issues with the
bus
service
such
as inappropriate staff, no
bus
services on weekends,
bus
stop relocation without prior notice and inconsistency in
bus
schedules is the biggest issue among them. Since buses do not arrive on
time
I have to wait for a long
time
at
bus
stops and reach late the destination. It becomes difficult to stand longer at
bus
stops in winter.
Besides
this
, there is poor connectivity between buses and because of, that I have spent more
time
waiting.
As a result
, I waste almost two to three hours a day which impacts my productivity. I want you to look into
this
serious problem as everyone's
time
is precious. Please make the schedule on
time
so that we can rely on the
bus
service.
Apart from
this
, extend the
bus
service in winter as it is not safe to walk in winter. I hope to see all these changes soon. Thank you, Neel Patel
Submitted by Neel Patel on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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