The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs
illustrates
the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrate
people
born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside of Use synonyms
Australia
during the period 1995, and 2005 living in Use synonyms
cities
, town and Rural Use synonyms
areas
.
As per the graph when we compare the percentage of Use synonyms
people
living in Use synonyms
city
, towns and Rural Fix the agreement mistake
cities
areas
born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
during the period of 1995, we could see the percentage Use synonyms
Use synonyms
people
born outside Change preposition
of people
Use synonyms
australia
living in Change the capitalization
Australia
cities
and rural Use synonyms
areas
relatively higher; Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
People
born in Use synonyms
Austrlia
living in Town is higher when compared with the statistics of Correct your spelling
Australia
people
outside of Use synonyms
Australia
living in Use synonyms
rurla
Correct your spelling
rural
areas
.
The same during the period 2010 we could Use synonyms
obsever
that the Correct your spelling
observe
observer
Use synonyms
people
born in Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Australia
living in Use synonyms
Cities
Use synonyms
is
slightly increased but the Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
people
born Correct quantifier usage
number of people
outid
of Correct your spelling
outside
Austrlaia
living in Correct your spelling
Australia
Cities
remain Use synonyms
same
, and we could notice there is a drop compared to the year 1995 in Correct article usage
the same
people
living in town and rural Use synonyms
areas
despite the fact that being born in Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
outiside
Correct your spelling
outside
Australia
.Use synonyms
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