some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sum of money that are out of proportion to the importance of work that they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement and what's your opinion.

Presently,
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an individual
the individual
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individual
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who
work
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in
film
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the film
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industry
were
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paying
with
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crores of amount for 1 movie but health professionals,
army
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and other qualified persons were less paid for
there
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dedication towards their job. Nearly more than 10 times the payments received by celebrities. In below paragraphs explained about
statement
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regarding professionals paid
as well as
more.
Firstly
, every carrier
have
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their
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own importance and growth.
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who
well
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qualified
in
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as
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engineers, doctors, teachers and other
employee
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employees
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doing well in their job but they were not happy with
efforts
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what
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they giving
while
heartly
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heartily
.
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, during
pandemic
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a pandemic
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situation in 2019, not only
doctor
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doctors
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and
nurse
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nurses
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other employees like cleaners, security guards and police officers
were
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worked almost more than 18 hours a day. They have sacrificed their family to take care
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of people
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people
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health but
government
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didn't
considered
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their efforts and not even paid well for their dedication towards interest. Software developers were working day and night without any complaints to their managers as well private owners were working within the target dates for
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company
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succesful
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successful
and bringing them
in
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the upmost
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upmost
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marketing level but still some extent they were less paid
eventhogh
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even though
they are eligible for hard
works
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work
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.
Hence
, I am agreeing with the statement
as
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provided by the
people
.
Thus
,
people
should be paid
lacks
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of
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price for all professions.
Celebreties
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Celebrities
like
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person,
film
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industry were paid with
lacks
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of amount for
there
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their
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work
. Even though
by
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hard
work
sacrificing some health these
people
were totally eligible for getting huge
amount
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amounts
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.
For example
,
movies
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in movies
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like bahubali, the main characters who played were not even agreed
for
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to
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other projects until completed
this movie shootings
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. For personality
aspects
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they have to maintain their proper diet and with lots of control
in
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over
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daily routine. Another example I would like to give is
sportsman
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sportsmen
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like cricketers , hardly they will sleep
atleast
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at least
6 hours and continues
work
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out,
practiced
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making them pay higher.
Hence
,
for
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every dedication in their
professional
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profession
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should be paid well. In summary, I am totally agreeing with the statement that celebrities were paying
lot
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than
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more than
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other professional
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another professional
other professionals
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. If government
as well as
any private owners respect their
employee
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employees
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and as per requirement
covering
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cover
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all timeliness
then
should be paid more than what they
deserves
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deserve
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.
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