The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates food
consumption
in kilograms per person
for each year
of 5 different meals such
as seafood, bread, meat
, fruit and vegetables from 1950 to 2010 in Australia.
Overall
, all kinds of eating habits were
increased over time except Unnecessary verb
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
meat
consumption
which was
decreased by more than 20 Unnecessary verb
apply
kg
per person
per year
.It was clear that the lowest consumed food was seafood and the highest consumed food was vegetables from 1950 to 2010.
In 1950 random Australian
consume nearly 140 kilograms of vegetables after that between 1960 and 2000 Correct your spelling
Australians
this
amount fluctuated. Finally
reached 160 kg
consumed per year
for
one citizen in 2010. Fruit Change preposition
by
also
began with 80 kg
consumption
per year
for each person
in 1950 and after a slight dropped between 1960-1970, peaked in
140kg per Change preposition
at
person
per year
in 2010. According to
the graph
bread peaked at 70kg Add a comma
,graph
consumption
amount in 1970. Nearly 30 years of the period between 1950 to 1980, seafood showed a steady period. After that increased by turtle speed. Meat
also
peaked in 1990 but suddenly started to fall. In 2010, an Australian citizen only consumed 80 kilograms of meat
per year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, person, year, meat, kg with synonyms.
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