You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to you, to complain about the quality of the
food
that we received yesterday. I am a frequent customer of your restaurant and
this
is the first time I had a very disappointing experience. Most of our office parties are held at your restaurant as everyone enjoys the
food
served by your hotel.
Hence
, I had come with my family yesterday so they could
also
experience the delicious
food
.
However
, the
food
that was served yesterday was not fresh at all.
Moreover
, the taste of vegetables had changed. It would be really great if the
food
that is
served is freshly prepared.
In addition
, the vegetables used
also
should be fresh and properly cleaned before use.
Besides
, tasting the
food
before serving it would
also
help. As a responsible customer of your outlet, I thought it is my duty to bring
this
unfortunate event to your notice. Yours faithfully, Anokhi Desai
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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