Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir or Madam,

This

Linking Words

is Prudhvi Pinninti, I have been one of your bank's loyal customers for almost a decade now. Currently, I am one of your premium customers who is maintaining relationships in all different banking categories. I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to express my dissatisfaction and complain about the latest statement for the month of January that I received yesterday. When I received a notification about the statement, I was simply astonished by looking at the balance to be paid and

then

Linking Words

I decided to review all the transactions.

While

Linking Words

doing that, I realized that there is a large volume of transactions that I haven't made through my credit card either online or at the store. I would like you to consider

this

Linking Words

as my formal complaint and proceed to investigate what

had

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

happened.

Although

Linking Words

I have not purchased these items by myself, I am not really sure if someone did

fradulent

Correct your spelling

fraudulent

transactions so I would appreciate

Correct pronoun usage

it if

show examples

you

can

Wrong verb form

could

show examples

block my card immediately. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Thank you for looking into

this

Linking Words

matter. Yours faithfully, Prudhvi Pinninti

prudhvi.pinninti18Sun Feb 12 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response

Provide specific details of the unauthorized transactions to strengthen your case.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure a clear progression of ideas and use transition words to improve coherence and cohesion.

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter *Explain why you want to take time off work *Give details of the amount of time you need *Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
I am writing you a letter to inform you that I will not be available for 3 days or more time because of my health issues.
5
band
Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Luck plays a role in everyone’s lives and their road to success. While some people rely on luck and believe that it is an essential factor to success, others argue that hard work and personal effort matters more. Even though luck can play a minor impact, effort is more pivotal to an individual’s success because it is under their control and hard work is necessary to seize the opportunity created by luck.
5.5
band
In some countries worldwide, men and women have children at a later age than in the past. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
In recent years, having kids at a later part of life has become increasingly common in many countries. This shift can be attributed to several factors, including changing societal norms and the pursuit of professional development. In this essay I will delve some reasons of this and try to look at the impact on family’s relationship and society as a whole.
6.5
band
Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
How children spend their free time will have an incredible impact on children's development in the future. While some people believe that children should be given sufficient free time for their own management, others put more priority on the importance of the role of parents. I generally agree with the former view as it leads to the growing power of self-management.
5.5
band
the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The goal of science is to pursue and leverage people’s living. Education is made to differentiate humans from ignorance. In my opinion, people have to get an education to have a broader point of view and become wiser by knowing any science and finally could increase their living. However, instead of getting higher education people in some communities are resistant to that statement.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries worldwide, men and women have children at a later age than in the past. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?