The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to english, in 200 and 2010.
Given are two pie charts revealing how many British students can speak languages except than English in 2000 and 2010.
Spanish is the most popular language among British pupils in 2000 with 30 per
cent
. After decade later, the number of Spanish-speaking students increased from 30 to 35 per cent
. German-speaking students were 10 per cent
in 2000 and this
figure was not changed in 2010. Speaking French, accounting for 15 per cent
in 2000 slightly dropped to 10 in 2010. In contrast
, the number of speakers of other languages climbed by 5 per cent
from 2000 to 2010 and become 20 per cent
, while
it was 15 per cent
. In 2000 two other languages were 10 per cent
,however
10 years later Add a comma
,however
this
figure rose to 15 per cent
. Among these ,rates most significant change was decreasing the number of those who did not speak another language. While
this
rate was 20 per cent
in 2000, it declined twice in 2010.
It is also
interesting to note that Spanish was the most popular language in both years.Submitted by ecelif2 on
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