The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The provided line graph compared the amount of three different forest manufacturing materials over two decades in the UK.
Overall
, the
production
of paper and packaging was raising drastically till the end of the
period
while
the other two categories experienced an absolute minimum. As data suggest that, at the beginning of the
period
, the amount of
paper based
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materials accounted for just over 250
million
tonnes. The figures rose steadily till 1990 and
then
climbed drastically to 350
million
tones
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. Meanwhile,
the
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sawn wood
production
experienced the least amount in 1980 and
then
this
number decreased slightly till 1990,
at the end
of the
period
, the figure reached an absolute minimum. The
production
of wood pulp accounted for just over 150
million
tonnes. The figure plunged steadily to 150
million
tonnes and
then
rose slightly till the end of the
period
. In conclusion, in all
of
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the
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three
production
materials only paper and packaging
was
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demanded more in the forest industry.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, period, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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