The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The provided line graph compared the amount of three different forest manufacturing materials over two decades in the UK.

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, the

production

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of paper and packaging was raising drastically till the end of the

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while

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the other two categories experienced an absolute minimum. As data suggest that, at the beginning of the

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, the amount of

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materials accounted for just over 250

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tonnes. The figures rose steadily till 1990 and

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climbed drastically to 350

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. Meanwhile,

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sawn wood

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experienced the least amount in 1980 and

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this

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number decreased slightly till 1990,

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of the

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, the figure reached an absolute minimum. The

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of wood pulp accounted for just over 150

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tonnes. The figure plunged steadily to 150

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tonnes and

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rose slightly till the end of the

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. In conclusion, in all

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three

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materials only paper and packaging

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demanded more in the forest industry.