The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The line graph depicts the manufacturing of
paper
,
wood
pulp
and sawn
wood
in the UK over 20 years,from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, the data indicate that
paper
and packaging goods
production
increased from
time
to
time
.
Whereas
, making timber
pulp
decreased for a certain period of
time
and started to increase again,
while
,producing sawn
wood
declined over
time
. First of all,in 1980, the
production
of
paper
items gradually increased.
However
, it has been seen that the progress was almost constant from 1980 to 1990, but from 1990 to 2000, it drastically changed and touched 350
million
tonnes
from 200
million
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, making
wood
pulp
goods slowly reduced from 1980 to 1990 when the
production
was 150
million
tonnes
. After 1990, the manufacturing of
wood
pulp
started to grow again and it stopped with the
production
of 140
million
tonnes
.
To sum up
, the
production
of sawn-
pulp
rapidly changed and it declined from 200
million
tonnes
to 120
million
tonnes
in 20 years,
while
paper
production
was the highest.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, wood, pulp, production, time, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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