The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph depicts the manufacturing of
paper
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,
wood
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pulp
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and sawn
wood
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in the UK over 20 years,from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
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, the data indicate that
paper
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and packaging goods
production
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increased from
time
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to
time
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.
Whereas
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, making timber
pulp
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decreased for a certain period of
time
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and started to increase again,
while
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,producing sawn
wood
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declined over
time
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. First of all,in 1980, the
production
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of
paper
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items gradually increased.
However
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, it has been seen that the progress was almost constant from 1980 to 1990, but from 1990 to 2000, it drastically changed and touched 350
million
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tonnes
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from 200
million
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tonnes
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.
On the other hand
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, making
wood
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pulp
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goods slowly reduced from 1980 to 1990 when the
production
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was 150
million
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tonnes
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. After 1990, the manufacturing of
wood
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pulp
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started to grow again and it stopped with the
production
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of 140
million
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tonnes
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.
To sum up
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, the
production
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of sawn-
pulp
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rapidly changed and it declined from 200
million
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tonnes
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to 120
million
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tonnes
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in 20 years,
while
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paper
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production
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was the highest.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, wood, pulp, production, time, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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