14) You have heard that there is a part-time job available in a nearby shop. Write a letter to the shop's manager, applying for the job. In your letter, specify what job you are applying for write about your experience and skills and why you should get an interview ask about the hours required for the job and give your preferred hours

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Dear Sir, My name is Suzanne Dunning and I am writing to apply for the part-time position in your clothing shop. I feel I would be an ideal candidate for the position and have much to offer your business. I have quite a lot of experience working in previous stores and so I am familiar with tasks
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as moving boxes, unpacking, stocking and register work. I have a keen interest in and knowledge of fashion; I would be able to create stylish clothing combinations for the mannequins, appealing to
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desired demographic that your shop targets. I have
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helping customers find the right clothing that suits them.
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to my experience and knowledge, I am a friendly and hard-working employee who can deal with any situation and I would bring energy and enthusiasm to your shop. With
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to working hours, I am currently a student and I have classes in the mornings. If I were to receive the position, I would
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be available to work any afternoons, evenings and weekends. Would
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an interview. Yours faithfully, Suzanne Dunning
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