The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates how many males and females are part of the

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force in three different

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, Canada, South Korea and Sweden, in 2005 and 2015.

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, the majority of the

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corresponded to

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men

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in all the

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in both years,

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Canada and Sweeden are the

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that contracted more

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for work. The most noticeable trend is that the

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percentage

of

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is superior for men than for

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in all the

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, with

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60% and almost 80% in 2005 and 2015.

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,

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situation is worst in South Korea, where the

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of

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working it is not more than 30% in 2005, and rose

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slightly

a 5% in 2015. The chart reveals that Canada is the only country where the

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of

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really changed,

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in 2005 the percentage of

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´s

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stood at 35%, in the next ten years there was a significant growth of 20% more

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employment

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for

women

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.