The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the exportations of products in one country during the period 2015-2016.

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, there was significant growth in the textile

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as well as

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in engineered goods,

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petroleum products are the area that brought

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the country more international money. Between 2015 and 2016, the highest growth was from the clothes industry with approximately 10 billons dollars in

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. Another three industries that increased their

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were agriculture, goods manufacturing and oil sectors.

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, gems and jewellery was the

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which saw a decrease in exports with about 5.18% less than the year before. In 2016, petroleum and engineered goods were the sectors that more money brought to the country, increasing over 60

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dollars the exportations

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, even though the textile industry saw a noticeable increment, it was the

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with fewer

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, the agricultural

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fluctuated steadily during the period with not so many changes.

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