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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Abhishek, I am writing
this
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 letter to request you leave for a period of one week beginning next Monday in order to complete the certification course that I have been preparing over the
last
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 two months. I have cleared all of my current backlogs and assigned a few remaining tasks to my offshore team which are critical for the next production release.
Although
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 there will be a lot of reviews that will be pending with me
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 my absence, as soon as I come back, I will ensure to clear them within a couple of days by stretching myself a little longer than the usual work schedule so that there won't be any impact to the timelines of deliverables. Once I get the certification, I will be eligible to officially take the customer-facing role for any new enhancements and implementation projects that our company might sign with any other new clients without having the need to recruit contractors who demand high salaries. It really helps us achieve our annual targets. Thank you for your consideration and I hope to hear a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, Prudhvi Pinninti
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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