You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know: when you will be arriving and leaving; what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost; inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Dear Mister or Miss LA is one of the most famous cities in the world.

Due to

this

Add a comma

,this

show examples

my family want to spend

some

Correct determiner usage

a

show examples

great time.My father's friend,whose name is Michael,highly recommended your hotel.Of

course

Add a comma

,course

show examples

we want to book a room,even maybe two,but

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

think

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

have to

discribe

Correct your spelling

describe

our plans.

Firstly

,

due to

summer,

me

Change the pronoun

I

show examples

and my family have plenty of time. We have already bought tickets

on

Change preposition

for

show examples

the Friday

Change the article

Friday

a Friday

show examples

,the way will take about 10 hours,

hence

to

this

we will arrive on

Saturday's

Change noun form

Saturday

show examples

morning.

Secondly

,my family consist of 5 people,

due to

this

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

want to book 2 rooms with single beds.Of course,we are waiting to see some basic

piece

Fix the agreement mistake

pieces

show examples

of

farniture

Correct your spelling

furniture

,

for example

table

Correct article usage

a table

show examples

,TV and the sofa.

However

,it is not a big deal if there wouldn't

be

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

some of them.

Thirdly

,

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

have read that you have a special offer for

this

month.Hope when we arrive it will still be and will impact

on

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the price sharply.And of course,

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

forget to tell

that

Correct pronoun usage

you that

show examples

my family is friendly and polite,so you will not have any problems.For our

entertainment

Add a comma

,entertainment

show examples

we want to swim in the ocean and just visit some

engagging

Correct your spelling

engaging

places. Looking forward

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

your answer.Hope it is still some

Correct your spelling

available

Correct your spelling

available

avaliable

Correct your spelling

available

rooms. Best regards Andrew