You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: • explain why you were at the restaurant • describe the problems • write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you to
complaint
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complain
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about
meal
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the meal
a meal
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in your
restaurant
. The main reason why I am choosing your
restaurant
is one of my friends
prefer
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prefers
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your
restaurant
.
However
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,However
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your
restaurant
looked beautiful
as well as
modern. We are ordered a lot of meals as our family is big. But
meal
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the meal
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was not delicious because of chef forget adding salt to the meat.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
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meal was not hot. I
am kindly ask
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am kindly asking
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from you
correct
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to correct
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the mistakes.
Also
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,Also
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return my full fund because we can not eat
this
meal. I am looking forward to your answers. Yours faithfully, George
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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