The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts compare the percentage of the three main uses of
water
, for
industry
,
agriculture
and domestic
use
, in six regions of the world.
It is clear that
in South
America
, Africa, central
Asia
and southeast China,
water
was mainly used in agricultural areas.
However
, in North
America
and Europe,
industry
accounted for the most amount of
water
use
, followed by
agriculture
. Both regions used the least amount of
water
for households. In South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
,
agriculture
took up the majority of
water
use
. In central
Asia
, even 88% of
water
was used in
this
section, followed by only 7% in domestic
use
and 5% in
industry
. A similar situation could be seen in Africa and South
America
.
While
in South East
Asia
, the main purpose of
water
use
was
also
for
agriculture
, at 81%, but the second largest usage was for
industry
, at 12%, which differed from the other three regions.
Whereas
Europe and North
America
used by far the most amount of
water
for their
industry
, both around half of the whole. They
use
only 32% and 39% of their
water
for
agriculture
and 15% and 13% for domestic
use
respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry, agriculture, use, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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