The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts compare the percentage of the three main uses of
water
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, for
industry
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,
agriculture
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and domestic
use
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, in six regions of the world.
It is clear that
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in South
America
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, Africa, central
Asia
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and southeast China,
water
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was mainly used in agricultural areas.
However
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, in North
America
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and Europe,
industry
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accounted for the most amount of
water
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use
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, followed by
agriculture
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. Both regions used the least amount of
water
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for households. In South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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,
agriculture
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took up the majority of
water
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use
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. In central
Asia
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, even 88% of
water
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was used in
this
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section, followed by only 7% in domestic
use
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and 5% in
industry
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. A similar situation could be seen in Africa and South
America
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.
While
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in South East
Asia
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, the main purpose of
water
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use
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was
also
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for
agriculture
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, at 81%, but the second largest usage was for
industry
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, at 12%, which differed from the other three regions.
Whereas
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Europe and North
America
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used by far the most amount of
water
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for their
industry
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, both around half of the whole. They
use
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only 32% and 39% of their
water
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for
agriculture
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and 15% and 13% for domestic
use
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respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry, agriculture, use, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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