People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that governments should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more and wider roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

there are several perspectives to solve

traffic

Use synonyms

,especially in huge cities. some

people

Use synonyms

have

this

Linking Words

viewpoint that the government must develop public transportation

such

Linking Words

as the train and subway lines.

in contrast

Linking Words

, other groups think if the state

increase

Correct subject-verb agreement

increases

show examples

the figure of bigger roads will be able to decline traffics. on the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that the union must rise the statistic of train and subway lines. from

this

Linking Words

point of view,

although

Linking Words

the price of

this

Linking Words

model of transportation needs to be a significant budget, most

people

Use synonyms

will be willing to use

this

Linking Words

transportation so the amount of

traffic

Use synonyms

reduce

Change the verb form

reduces

show examples

.

Linking Words

moreover

Add a comma

,moreover

show examples

the

schedual

Correct your spelling

schedule

of

this

Linking Words

type of transfer

often

Add a missing verb

is often

show examples

on time so the

satisification

Correct your spelling

satisfaction

of

passengar

Correct your spelling

passenger

growth

Replace the word

grew

show examples

rapidlly

Correct your spelling

rapidly

and the consumption of private vehicle

decline

Wrong verb form

declined

show examples

in

Change preposition

over

show examples

a long period.

on the other hand

Linking Words

, many

commentator

Change to a plural noun

commentators

show examples

justifiably

argue

Change the verb form

argues

show examples

that there are advantages to developing

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

roads. there are some

people

Use synonyms

that have to use

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

private

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

,

for

Linking Words

example

Add the comma(s)

,example

show examples

the family with

early

Add an article

an early

show examples

child

Replace the word

childhood

show examples

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

older

people

Use synonyms

, or when the weather is crazy.

as a result

Linking Words

if

Correct your spelling

of

show examples

the government have

negative

Add an article

a negative

show examples

attitude toward

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

developing roads, there will have several problems in the city.

furthermore

Linking Words

from

an industrial

Correct the article-noun agreement

an industrial viewpoint

industrial viewpoints

show examples

viewpoints

Add a comma

,viewpoints

show examples

the number of cars in every country is increasing every day. in conclusion,

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

both sides of

views

Fix the agreement mistake

view

show examples

have several merits that need to reduce

traffic

Use synonyms

jam

Fix the agreement mistake

jams

show examples

.

in other words

Linking Words

we cannot eliminate each opinion. so if we want to control

traffic

Use synonyms

especially

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

the inner city or

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

the future, we must build

wide

Add an article

a wide

the wide

show examples

road

Fix the agreement mistake

roads

show examples

and rise

number

Correct article usage

the number

show examples

of subway

line

Fix the agreement mistake

lines

show examples

and

train

Fix the agreement mistake

trains

show examples

.