The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females engaging in
exercise
depending on their
age
group in Australia in 2010. Looking from an
overall
perspective it is readily apparent that women had more enthusiasm with regard to physical activities than men throughout life except below 24 years of
age
where males had more interest in sports.
Besides
,the Australian community revealed physical activities as a popular aspect of their life as nearly 40% were involved in
exercise
at any given
age
. As mentioned above men engaged in
exercise
mostly in
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-24
age
group and declined to 42.2% during the next 10 years of their
age
.Between 35-44 ,the proportion dropped to 39.5% which was the lowest percentage of doing
exercise
before being levelled off at around 45% during the next three decades.
On the other hand
,47.7% of young females around 15-24 were involved in sports,
whereas
it rose gradually to peak between the 45-54
age
group,it remained stable during the next decade and hit a low of 47.1% when they are over
age
65.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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