The bar chart below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015 .

The bar chart below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015 .
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The bar chart compares information about the enrollment of male and female rates between three countries from 2005 to 2015 . The rates of hiring of males always have high results every period of time and every three publics. In South ,Korea the proportion of employed females was fewer than in the other two communities in 2005 and 2015 year. Generally saying all percentages rise slightly In Canada , the ratio of men and female jobs increased considerably especially, the per cent of female workers from 60 % to 70 %and from 35% to 55% respectively between 2005 and 2015 years. The percentage of enrolment between the two societies South Korea and Sweden did not see a big change. In South Korea and Sweden , the proportion of female contracting grows slowly from 30%to 35% and 45% to 55% respectively .In ,Sweden the ratio of male workers decrease from 75%to 70% between 2005 and 2015 years.
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  • bar charts
  • percentages
  • employment
  • countries
  • 2005
  • 2015
  • trends
  • differences
  • changes
  • men
  • women
  • variations
  • patterns
  • significant
  • observations
  • summarize
  • findings
  • predictions
  • future trends
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