Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous if government forbid the sale of bottled

water

. I completely disagree with

this

opinion and think that

this

trend has many drawbacks. First of all, I believe that

water

is one of the vital elements which is really necessary to human beings.

In other words

, without a drink, none of the living creatures can survive. Unfortunately,

this

crucial element is limited in the world and because of global warming the natural glaciers are melting;

hence

, it’s a great menace to natural

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. The government should consider the future

people

and save

this

vital liquid.

For example

, by selling the rain produced in the factory, the public understands its value and never wastes it carelessly.

Secondly

, companies produce bottled drinks with great precision

and

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reduce harmful materials from

water

and add minerals that are required for the human body.

For instance

, when

people

drink mineral

water

, they know they

drink

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filtered

water

that doesn't have any detrimental effect on their bodies;

therefore

, many diseases

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from the earth and public hygiene may grow. What's more, by prohibiting bottled

water

trade many

people

make

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redundant and lose their job;

therefore

, unemployment increase in society and the crowd should look for other jobs that may turn into illegal jobs.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that selling

water

in bottles is more beneficial than distributing

water

freely because it is a significant element for living and

people

should use it thriftily ,

moreover

, bottled

water

doesn't have a damaging effect on

people

's bodies.