The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. 150 words

The bar chart reveals the percentages of British people who purchased three types of music albums

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sex and

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.

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, it is obviously clear that there were 3 types of music albums which are called Pop,

Rock

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and Classical

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the majority of people have bought

Rock

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albums and a minor majority of citizens have purchased Classical music tapes

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except the

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group of +45.

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with,

Rock

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song tapes have been purchased by a significant number of individuals

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older aged people and more than 30% of teenagers who were in the 25-34

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group included it. Less than 20% of females and less than 10% of older ones had flavour on

Rock

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, the percentages of buying Pop tapes were similar to the

Rock

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percentages.

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, 20% of society who were +45

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had passionate about Classical,

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to the ages 16-24 and 35-44.

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, more than 15% of teenage individuals were captivated by Classic songs

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nearly 10% of males bought that kind of song CDs.