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In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

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It is true that the number of installed
cameras
 has
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 increased in many countries all over the world to deter crime.
However
, a segment of society is satisfied with these
cameras
, others believe that they have invaded our privacy. First and foremost,
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surveillance
camera
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 public places leads to the restriction of our personal freedom. These
cameras
 capture and record every moment which
make
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 some people feel uncomfortable and lead them to act carefully.
While
 it is not a major issue, it can be certainly a nuisance at some times. Even so, I would approve that the benefits
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 expanded recorder
cameras
 in the streets are more effective than its limitations.
Firstly
, these
cameras
 can offer safe public places by reducing criminal activities.
Secondly
, seeing surveillance
camera
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cameras
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 in the place might put people off criminal
behavior
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. They understand that they are being watched and
this
 prevented them from doing crimes.
For example
,
Kuwait
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, which is a safe country, the rate of crimes has
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decreased in the latest years
due to
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recorded
cameras
 everywhere. Of course, all too often, the existence of police officers helps
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society to be safer by deterring
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people from crime, but the
camera
 has advantages over
the
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human law keepers. Unlike a human police officer, the
camera
 does not fall asleep and plays all the time
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 all days. In conclusion, the features of utilizing video
cameras
 around cities to improve
security
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 of the society overweigh the disadvantages.
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