The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below illustrate the average
percentage
of nutrients
: sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar in different types of meals.If consumed in excess amounts, those nutrients
can be harmful to health.
overall
, a closer look at the the
charts reveals that Remove the redundancy
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dinner has the Correct article usage
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the
highest Remove the redundancy
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percentage
of all three nutrients
and breakfast on the other hand
has the least of nutrients
shown in the graphs.
The percentage
of sodium
is very low in snacks, only 14% and the saturated fat is only 21%.Breakfast in
contrast, has the highest Add the comma(s)
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percentage
of sugar 42%.
Lunch has a similar percentage
of sodium
29% and saturated fat,and slightly less added sugar 19%.The sodium
is almost half of the nutritional value of the dinner.43% .Dinners have less saturated fat 37% and only 23% of other sugars.Submitted by Niamh Gal on
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