The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below illustrate the percentage of online sales by retail sectors in New Zealand in 2000 and 2013.
Overall
, It can be seen that travelling was very popular in 2003, with the most sales online, considerably less money was spent on other activities Linking Words
such
as clothes shopping, purchasing films and music from online websites, and buying books. Linking Words
However
, in 2013 Linking Words
people
's interests changed.
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To begin
with, the most cash was spent on travelling in 2003, 36% of Linking Words
people
chose to travel. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the least money was spent on purchasing books.In 2013 Linking Words
people
started spending money on other activities rather than travelling . Only 29% travelled . Shopping online was Use synonyms
also
a popular activity in 2003, 20% brought clothes online. Linking Words
In addition
, in 2013 Linking Words
people
started buying clothes from shops and only 16% shopped online. Only 20%of Use synonyms
people
chose to buy films and music online in 2000,and 33% in 2013.Use synonyms
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