The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the best ten countries for the manufacture and
usage
of electricity
in 2014.
Overall
, China was the leader in electricity
production
and consumption
and the United States follows china in second place. There is a huge gap between the second and third country
Russia was the third one in the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
usage
and consumption
the electricity
. The Korean Republic were the least one in production
and consumption
.
First of all, China had a huge lead in electricity
production
with nearly 5.4 billion
kWh
and uses 5.322 billion
kWh
of electricity
. The closest one to follow them is the United States with over 4 billion
kWh
production
and nearly 3.9 billion
consumption
.
Secondly
, India and Canada produce way more than usage
they manufacture over 100 billion
kWh
. On the other hand
, Germany uses 582 billion
kWh
of electricity
and they only produce 526 billion
kWh
of electricity
there was a gap between usage
and production
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