The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did

 not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare and contrast ,how UK
graduates
and postgraduate students ended up after completing their
studies
in 2008 in four different categories namely,part-time
work
,voluntary
work
,
further
studies
and unemployed,except for people who entered full-time
work
at the end
of their education. Looking from an
overall
perspective,it is readily apparent that the number of
graduates
surpassed the number of postgraduates, engaging in the given four categories.In both groups majority of individuals were involved in
further
studies
while
voluntary
work
was the least popular among all. 29665 UK alumna enrolled on
further
studies
, becoming the largest group among the given groups,
whereas
only 3550 did the voluntary jobs, being the least interesting activity.Contrastly, less than nearly 10 fold of postgraduate students took the pathway to
further
studies
and voluntary
work
(2725 and 345 respectively). Part-time
work
was enjoyed by 17735
graduates
and 2535 postgraduates meanwhile,16235
graduates
and 1625 postgraduate students remained unemployed in the given year.
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