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Many countries are experience in population growth and need more home. Should these new home be constructed in existing cities or should new town be built in the countryside?

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The police investigates the robbery that take place
last
 week. So far, they discovered nothing and have arrested no one. She mop the floor when her cousin came in. She scolded him angrily because he made the floor dirty with his muddy shoes. The police investigate the robbery that take place
last
 week. So far, they discover nothing and have arrested no one. She look very worried for the past few days; but when I ask what the matter was, she said that it was nothing. She says that she send the letter a month ago; but, so far, she
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 receive any reply. She thinks that her letter was lost in the post. He walked along the road, wondering what happen and where all the people go. The streets were deserted, and the stalls were left as they were, with fruit and vegetables arranged in neat rows.
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