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You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In your letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find

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Dear Sir / Madam. I am withing to thank one of your staff members named 'John Newman'. John helped me to find the precious purse that I lost on a bus mistakenly the day before yesterday. It was crucial for me as gifted by my husband
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 it had my bank cards, valuable documents and some cash. His way of dealing with ruff situations is excellent. He is a good listener and problem solver.
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, he collected all the required information from me regarding In my pocketbook and ensure me to help out as possible he can. After that, he connected with the bus driver.
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, he delivered all the information about the seat numbers and the identity of the wallet. Luckily, the wallet was on the same spot and
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 successfully passed it on to me. I felt extremely grateful for his amazing Service. I really appreciate his wisdom, and approach in
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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