People hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree with this statement?  Give reasons for your answer. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Some individuals chose to spend their leisure
time
with
regards
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to the public trend rather than spending it in a productive manner. I strongly believe that,
people
's interest in spending their free
time
doing more valuable activities
such
as performing exercise and family
time
. Nowadays,
people
are becoming busier in meeting the demands of their daily lives.
However
, many individuals are still conscious when it comes to their
overall
wellness.
People
use their free
time
at work in doing relaxation
technique
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such
as breathing and
strecthing
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stretching
exercises.
Moreover
, spending their free
time
wisely
help
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the employees
re-charge
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recharge
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their body and concentrate
in
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the job.
For instance
, in my
workplace
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we are given a
30 minute
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breaktime
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and
i
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I
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spend it eating
my
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healthy snacks and socializing with my colleagues.
This
kind of relaxation inspired me to be more efficient and productive at work. Another reason is
people
chose to allocate the rest days with their families to have a simple family gathering. Apart from that, some individuals
proritise
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prioritise
family
time
because it's a way of showing love to them. They prefer to have dinner and some games that would encourage participation among family members.
In addition
, others like parents love to bring their children
in
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to
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the park and playground where they could maximize the space for them to be able to do physical activities.
For instance
, every
weekends
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my husband and
i
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I
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always see to it that we bring our children to their favourite restaurant and
then
go to
park
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to do some playing to burn all the calories that we had. In conclusion, spending leisure
time
depends on the
people
's impact nor
others
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preference on how to use it. I strongly believe,
people
should value
free
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the free
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time
that they have because it would help maintain a healthy body both physically and emotionally.
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