The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the information about how many male and female workers are there in a university in 2012 in different faculties.
Overall
, As seen from Linking Words
above
number the male highest percentage occupied in Add an article
the above
an above
engineering
sector Correct article usage
the engineering
whereas
, Linking Words
education
facilities females carried Change preposition
in education
tops
position.
In beginning, arts carried almost similar percentages 58 % and 42 % respectively. Correct article usage
the tops
Moreover
, almost half of the males are engaged in business 62 %. One of the interesting points is Linking Words
females
portion(72%) is almost three times more than Change noun form
females'
female's
males
(25).
Change noun form
males'
male's
On the other hand
, one Linking Words
forth
percentage of total staff are boys in engineering fields which is the highest among all portions.Correct your spelling
fourth
Furthermore
, both staff have Linking Words
a
nearly the same ratio in the medical field.Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, both in law and science males have almost similar percentage average Linking Words
60
which is higher than females which carries almost 40 on average.Change preposition
of 60
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