The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the proportions of the employees in seven different sectors in a major university depending on their gender in 2012.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent the majority of males are involved in engineering faculty
whereas
most females are incorporated in education faculty
.Besides
, the engineering faculty
has the least percentage of women as staff members, the business department holds the lowest proportion of men.In the medicine department, they share nearly equal proportions .
85% of the total staff in the engineering faculty
are males while
science ,business and law departments occupy them in significant proportions accounting for 62%,62%, and 60% respectively.Their contribution to education and arts is marginally low.( 25%;42% respectively.)
On the other hand
, female counterparts collaborate with 72% of education faculty
.Apart from arts medicine and law where they achieve 58%;50% and 40% respectively ,other departments lack females as staff members accounting below 40%.Submitted by g.s.subasinghe on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words faculty with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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