Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to this? Do you think the advantages overweight the disadvantages?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
processed meal is available easily in the market. Most
precessed
Correct your spelling
processed
show examples
food
Use synonyms
contains preservatives and chemicals to increase the life of
Use synonyms
food stuff
Correct your spelling
foodstuff
show examples
. I
poine
Correct your spelling
point
opine
that
Change preposition
out that
show examples
, processed
food
Use synonyms
is not good because there are more drawbacks
such
Linking Words
as human health issues. On the one hand, a number of people believe that processed foods are good and easy to cook and save plenty of time.
In addition
Linking Words
,
read
Wrong verb form
reading
show examples
meals save us a lot of
mony
Correct your spelling
money
because it is less expensive than eating out at any restaurant.
For example
Linking Words
, a
college going
Add a hyphen
college-going
show examples
student, who is working
part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
show examples
job. They can afford
this
Linking Words
type of
food
Use synonyms
without
worring
Correct your spelling
worrying
about
Add an article
the thair
show examples
thair
Correct your spelling
their
show examples
daily budget.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it can
stored
Change the verb form
be stored
show examples
for longer periods.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, there are some drawbacks to consuming ready-made meals.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people who
onsumed
Correct your spelling
consumed
consume
packaged meals are suffering from serious diseases
such
Linking Words
as diabetes, high cholesterol, obesity and
concer
Correct your spelling
cancer
concern
because foods are preserved with chemicals which are not good for health.
For instance
Linking Words
, in China, 98% of
peopleare eatting
Correct your spelling
people are eating
packaged
food
Use synonyms
and they
surrer
Correct your spelling
suffer
from disease.
For instance
Linking Words
, in
india
Change the capitalization
India
show examples
, mostly both parents are working and their children can cook maggie easily and
then
Linking Words
after
children's
Change noun form
children
show examples
are suffering obesity.
Morever
Correct your spelling
Moreover
,
ready-meals
Correct your spelling
ready meals
show examples
gives
Correct subject-verb agreement
give
show examples
lower nutrition.
Thus
Linking Words
, there is a growth in the obesity rate around the globe.
To sum up
Linking Words
, there are many
pro's
Change noun form
pros
show examples
and
con's
Change noun form
cons
show examples
to
Replace the word
too
show examples
packaged
food
Use synonyms
. The advantage is a
save
Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
show examples
time and
make
Change the verb form
makes
show examples
easily. and
disadvantage
Correct article usage
the disadvantage
show examples
is that
peopleare
Correct your spelling
people are
suffering
many
Change preposition
from many
show examples
diseases.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: