The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
The chart provides data on the trends of professions in the USA from 1975 to 2025. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that agricultural jobs started as the most prominent,
however
, ending with one of the lowest after being beaten by services. To start, it appears to be visible that at the beginning both offices and manufacturing started at a similar prominency,
furthermore
, they were improving exponentially until 1980, when there was a sudden turn of events and fabrication suddenly lost its dominance and dwindled. The other category continued growing and is predicted to expand to 90 million employers by 2025.
According to
the data,
it is clear that
cultivation was the most well-known as it almost had the same amount of workers as ministration.
This
did not
last
long though since it fell into a major downward spiral in 1977 and ended off with 80 per cent fewer members.
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