You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In your letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to share an extremely pleasant experience I had
while
travelling on one of the buses of your company. I am a regular commuter of your buses but
this
time
while
travelling from New Brunswick to Calgary, I forgot my a small bag in it and when I realised, I talked to the nearest staff member named Frank Joshua, at Calgary bus stop. That bag had my laptop and my wallet containing my credit cards, debit cards and a handsome amount of cash. He helped me immensely by following up with the bus driver
then
he drove to the next station at which the bus was stopped and brought my bag back. I really appreciate his assistance in
this
matter.
Besides
, I would say that
such
employees are really important for reputable companies like yours, they will surely take you much ahead in your business. Thanks once again for all the services. Yours faithfully, Rose Mary
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