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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#minutes #item #value #train #railway #company #action #addresses #sir #madam
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Dear Sir, I hope you are having a good day. I want to report a
lost
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 when I took the
train
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 from Taipei to Yilan today evening. I lost my
laptop
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 on the
train
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 when I got off the
train
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 to Yilan at 10pm, but I forgot to carry it with me. I forget my
laptop
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 which is set under my seat. My seat number is W23, near the window. The
train
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 number is T134
departured
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departed
 from Taipei at 8 pm today. My
laptop
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 is
15 inch
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 screen and ASUS brand new
packaged
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and packaged
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 in a black
laptop
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 bag. I have already
connect
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 the lost and
fund
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found
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 department of the
train
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while
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but
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 the staff said no
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train
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 staff have received
this
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 item yet. I have a lot of important materials regarding my research
in
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 my
laptop
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. I hope you can search
it
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for it
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 for me. I kindly request whether
staff
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the staff
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 can check my
laptop
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 on my seat or on the
train
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 again for me. If you have any info regarding my
laptop
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, please do not hesitate to contact me. I really appreciate it. You can contact me via my phone number at 666-555-8888 or
this
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 email address. Thank you for all the help. Best regards, Kathy
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