The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998.
The table shows the proportion of
production
of cacao beans
in six different regions between 1992 and 1998.
Overall
, it can be seen that production
of cocoa
beans
increased in Asia , South America
and Oceania in a given period of time whereas
Africa and England decreased slightly . Meanwhile, number
of cacao Change the article
a number
the number
beans
produced in North Central America
was same
as starting Correct article usage
the same
of
the year.
Asia and South Replace the word
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America
became biggest
producers of Correct article usage
the biggest
cocoa
beans
from 1992 to 1998.In 1992 Asia started production
with 11900 tons cocoa
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of cocoa
beans
and the figures of
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for
production
saw a dramatic rise to almost 43600 tons in 1998. In addition
, a significant majority of the production
in South America
observed
over 6 years. By the year 1998, South Add a missing verb
was observed
America
’s production
had risen to 38900.Both Countries experienced increase
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an increase
of
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in
production
of Correct article usage
the production
cocoa
beans
.
Initially
, England produced 56000 tons cocoa
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of cocoa
beans
in 1992 then
it continued to produce to
67000 and suddenly fell by 43000 Change preposition
apply
production
.In 1998 England dropped Change to a plural noun
productions
at
49000 Change preposition
to
of
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apply
cocoa
beans
. Similarly
, Africa slightly fell from 1992 t0
1998. Correct your spelling
to
On the other hand
, in
North and Central Change preposition
apply
America
saw a decline in production
between 1994 but over 6 years it remain unchanged.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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