The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
The pie charts show the percentage of
volunteer
people
in various kinds of organizations
in 2008 and 2014.
Overall
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sports
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healthcare
organizations
increased whereas
the proportion of volunteer
people
in other types of organizations
decreased. In addition
, the overall
percentages of all organizations
varied over a given period of time.
In 2008, participation of volunteer
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in environmental
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organizations
volunteers
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volunteers
which was 15%, while
only 7% volunteers
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compared with the other fields, at 29% and 25% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for art and other volunteers
both fell by 6%. There was also
a slight fall in volunteers
in educational organizations
, at 17%, while
volunteering in health care was still the least preferred option, at only 8%.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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