The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of men, women and
children
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in the UK ingesting
five
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portions of
fruit
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and
vegetables
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daily over a period of eight years.
It is clear that
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the percentage of women consuming
five
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proportions of fruits and
vegetables
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is
overall
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higher than the other two groups of people over the period shown.
By contrast
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, the group of
children
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can be seen to have the lowest proportion of those who eat a large amount of
fruit
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and
vegetables
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in their daily intake. In 2001, over 20% of females consumed
five
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proportions of
fruit
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and
vegetables
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,
while
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males and
children
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had relatively low figures of around 17% and 12%. Since
then
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, the percentage of women rose continuously and reached a peak of over 35% in 2006. A similar tendency can be seen in the male group. From 2001 to 2003, the figure for males remained stable
then
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slowly increased, and peaked at around 27% in 2006.
However
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, the figures for
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eating
five
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proportions of
fruit
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and
vegetables
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have always been the lowest, but an increasing trend is
also
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shown. And in 2007 saw about 25% of
children
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ate
five
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portions a day.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, five, fruit, vegetables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dietary habits
  • nutritional intake
  • health-conscious
  • percentages
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • public health initiatives
  • recommended intake
  • demographic differences
  • graphical analysis
  • upward/downward trend
  • health implications
  • national averages
  • gender disparities
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