The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the weekly
consumption
of four different types of meat (fish
, lamb
, beef
, and chicken
) in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, lamb
, fish
, and beef
consumption
reduced throughout the time period while
chicken
consumption
rose. Additionally
, the least favorite
type of meat among the four was Change the spelling
favourite
fish
.
To begin
with, the weekly intake of fish
started at just over 50 grams
and fluctuated over the period before reaching its lowest point of roughly 48 grams
in 1999. It then
slowly increased to around 49 grams
. Secondly
, beef
consumption
started at around 220 grams
per person in 1979 and was the most popular type of meat that year. However
, beef
intake fluctuated in the following years and reached a peak of around 245 grams
per week before declining to its lowest point of roughly 100 grams
between 1999 and 2004.
On the other hand
, lamb
and chicken
consumption
began at around 150 grams
at the beginning of the period. Lamb
experienced a gradual decrease over the next two and a half decades while
experiencing several fluctuations, ultimately reaching around 60 grams
. Finally
, chicken
consumption
experienced an upward trend and reached its highest point of 250 grams
in 2004.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
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