most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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In a day people spend an enormous amount of time on time at
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particular
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some elements keep a predominant role
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happiness at their
work
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. The following essay will discuss in detail
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some factors and how realistic they are.
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range of salary
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, as well as commanding positions,
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as well as
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commanding positions are major factors for
job
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satisfaction
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. A
well paid
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salary can endure all the living expenses smoothly and the
well
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position post secures their
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. Another aspect,
if
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any person would get better
circumstance
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and good management, they will
work
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with their full potential and enthusiasm
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they could not survive and leave the
job
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.
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, the majority of employees confirmed that the expression of the manager is one of the reasons for choosing their
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, giving regular workloads.
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result
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the employees reduce their
job
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performance.
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, in the 21st century getting all the benefits from their
work
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is quite impossible, because a huge competition among
job
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candidates is running all over the world. Though they can't manage all the factors that provide
satisfaction
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, they have to continue their
job
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for attaining their living expenses.
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, in spite of getting a highly paid
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they can't dispel the mental stress. They are provided
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of
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lots of responsibility. In conclusion, in
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job
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sector the
satisfaction
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essential
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thing. There are
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of elements that
caters
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the
job
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satisfaction
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as well as
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realities
have
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that have
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to be faced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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