two pie charts below show the percentages of industry's sectors' contribution to the economy

two pie charts below show the percentages of industry's sectors' contribution to the economy
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The two pie charts represent how different proportions the industry sector contributed to the economy in Turkey from 2000 to 2016.
Overall
, the largest and the least economic parts in the year 2000 were made up of agriculture and construction respectively.
On the other hand
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2016, the highest and the lowest sectors were accounted for by healthcare and education and finance, business and others. Regarding the charts, agriculture was responsible for 24% in 2000 and sharply declined to 14% in 2016. For government and leisure and hospitality both dropped 3% and accounted for 9% and 14% in the year 2016 respectively.
However
, the healthcare and education sectors remain constant at 17%. Construction was the part that changed the most. It remarkably increased up to 10%
at the end
of the period. Compare with manufacturing and finance, business and other steadily rose from 8% and 5% to 12% and 8% respectively.
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