The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The figure illustrates the

process

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used to make drinking

water

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by rain, in a little city in Australia.

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, it can be seen that it is not a complicated

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which is formed only by six stages, the linear

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, technically begins when there are

atmosferic

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atmospheric

precipitations,

through

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though

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it can continue to loop indefinitely every time it rains.

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, the saving procedure starts on the roof of the house, from which all the drops fall down into the drain, which is under the structure. Later the rain arrives at the

water

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filter where is cleaned and the next phase is

the

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apply

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storage,

inside

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which is collected the

water

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before the treatment. At that point, the

water

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is ready to be filtered one more time with the addition of some chemicals

at

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in

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the

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that makes the

water

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drinkable.

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,

on

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the

last

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phase

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every person in the town can enjoy the

water

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from the tap of his house.