The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the process used in a little city in Australia to create drinking
water
from rain.
Overall
, it is not a complicated process, in fact, it is formed by only six stages.
This
linear process technically begins when there are atmospheric precipitations, though it can continue to loop indefinitely every time it rains.
To begin
with, the saving procedure starts on the house’s roof, from which all the raindrops fall into the drain placed under the structure. Later the rain arrives at the
water
filter where it is cleaned and
then
passes to the next phase, the storage, in which the
water
is collected before the treatment. At
this
point, the
water
is ready to be filtered one more time with the addition of some chemicals that make it drinkable.
Finally
, in the
last
phase, every person in the town can enjoy the
water
from the tap of their house.
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