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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the look of a university’s
sports
 centre now and how it going to be in the future after reconstruction.
Overall
, the
sports
 centre is expected to be a multi-functional building with various types of new facilities in it. In the middle
section
, it is clear to see that reception will remain in the same spot in the future
while
 it will connect to a 25m long pool with a changing room on its left side and a seating area on its right side. The location of
the
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entrance stays unchanged which is located in the south of the middle
section
. It is worth noticing that there are two amenities that will be constructed which is a
sports
 shop, on the left side of the entrance
while
 a Café is on the right. In the east
section
, outdoor courts will be replaced by a
sports
 hall and two dancing studios. There are in the east corner of the building,
whereas
 changing rooms are in the south corner. The leisure pool is planning to be replaced by other outdoor courts in the west
section
while
 a changing room is in the south of it.
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