The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts illustrate in terms of
electricity
generation based on different sources (coal, oil, natural gas, hydro
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hydropower
power
and nuclear power
) in Australia
and France
in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, Australia
used coal as their major source to produce electricity
in both years. However
, France
showed significant figures in 2000 in
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for
power
source
. Fix the agreement mistake
sources
Besides
, the total production of electric power
was
increased in both regions.
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Australia
, 50 units
of electricity
were produced by burning coal in 1980 and it increased to 130 units
in 2000. However
, in France
, it was only 25 units
that generated
by coal Add a missing verb
were generated
in
each year. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, hydro
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hydropower
power
contributed for
20 and 36 Change preposition
to
units
in Australia
in 1980 and 2000, while
France
generated 5 and 2 units
in those years.
Noticeably, the production of electricity
by natural gas was reduced from 20 to 2 units
in Australia
, whereas
in France
, it declined from 25 to
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apply
units
. Moreover
, oil usage was also
reduced in Australia
for electricity
but it was
increased in Unnecessary verb
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France
. Finally
, it is work
to point Change the verb form
is working
that
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out that
Australia
did not use nuclear power
to generate electricity
but France
generated 15 units
in 1980 and 126 unit
in 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
units
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, australia, france, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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