The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the proportion of four
group
of ages in New Zealand in the period between 1950 and 2050.
During Change to a plural noun
groups
this
time, two groups
with the age from
35 to above have increased from 1950 to 2050, Change preposition
apply
while
two other groups
have experienced a decrease. Group
35-74 is the group
with the most dramatic increase in the percentage of population
and has the highest data in 1950.
In 1950, the percentage of the Add an article
the population
population
in groups
0-14, 15-34, 35-64 and 65 plus were estimated at around 10%, 15%, 28% and 32% respectively. Over the following 40 years, the 15-34 group
rose strongly to about 45%, while
three other groups
only changed slightly. In 2023, 0
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the 0
group
and the 35-64 group
have the same figure for population
and Correct article usage
the population
group
35-65 group
begin overtaking 0
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the 0
group
.
In 2030, 0
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the 0
group
will continue to be overtaken by the 65 above
Add a hyphen
65-above
group
at around 16%, while
the percentage of population
of the 15-34 Add an article
the population
group
will be still highest
. In 2045, Correct article usage
the highest
35
-64 Correct article usage
the 35
group
will start to overtake the 15-34 group
at 30% and become the group
with the biggest proportion of population
in New Zealand. In the Add an article
the population
last
year in the graph, the data of the population
of 4 groups
are predicted in order from 0 to 65 above years old at about 10%, 29%, 34% and 20% respectively.Submitted by andyvinhtran1212 on
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